Question

请高手帮忙改英语作文的一部分,内容很空洞,都是大白话.主要看语法,

Answer 1

的确是大白话,句子结构非常单一,当然你不要求我也不提了,语法大体都对

有两处提一下：

I didn't think he could become to a person who is important to me at that time,I thought he just a passer in my life.

become 后面不加to 建议改成 become someone who is important to me.

第二处：

There was too much zeros in the front of the number.

这个不用说怎么改了吧,你都给zero加s了 怎么还用much呢?