你是三篇都要还是一篇啊
我发你一篇旅游经历的,如果其他都要打声招呼
我貌似都有
Last summer holiday,I went to HaiNan with my family.The weather was pleasant!The sky was blue more than I could describe,the sea was blue and bright more than I could believe.Walking by the sea is just like being in the oil painting!We sailed to an island called Xidao.I swam there.Swimming in the sea is quite different from that in a pool.Bedsides swimming,we also had a good meal there.We had a nice seafood dish.
And I bought back many beautiful shells.If you want to have a look,you may ask me.Or,we may go to Hainan together,for I am always hoping to come to that place again.I really like that place,a place of blue and brightness.
可定没有语法错误
因为是老师写的
放心用