题目是：乘坐公共交通工具旅行有哪些优点或缺点?
这个问题我高三时也写过.
你的作文意思是：目前,我们的生活离不开公共交通.当我们去上学或上班时,我们通常采取做公交车和地铁的方式.我们使用它们是因为它们都非常方便,安全.但其实是不舒服的.因此,我认为开我们自己的汽车旅行更方便,舒适.公共交通十分缓慢.我们年轻,所以我们不能浪费任何时间.
At present,we can not live without public transport.When we go to school or work,we usually take the bus and subway to do way.This is because they give us the convenience and security.However,this is uncomfortable.Because a lot of people by bus,car is very crowded,and delays on the way a lot of time.On the contrary,if we are to open your own car travel will be more convenient and comfortable.
As the saying goes,"a coin has two faces."Take public transport vehicles to fulfill their advantages and disadvantages!Therefore,we can take different situations to take a different approach.
仅供参考,也许也有语法错误,能力有限了.不知道你们的评分标准,自己选合适的内容改吧!