1.There was a young man who wanted to find a good job, so he send his resume to a company.这里的send改为sent
2.Eleven people was agreed to go for the second interview.这里应该用复数的,还有agree的用法这里好像怪怪的,改为required（要求）会好一点.
3.Can you guess who is the unwanted man for the interview? 这里应该用过去式was吧
4.I wasn’t reconcile to the result .这里的意思应该是不满意吧,应该改为i didn't satisfied with the outcome.
5. wanted to know in which aspect other people did better than me. 这里which前面的in 可省略
6.I used to worked for 18 companies without a job-hopping.这里worked用完形.
7.I known the reasons of every failed company were totally different. 这里的konwn改为过去式.大概这样了吧