That's my brief experiences for the recent years.Rent business is full of competition,I will put my feet on the ground and make my fullest effort,always be humble and eager for learning,so as to fight for every single profit for the company.I sincerely hope you offer me the chance so that I can do my part for the development for company.
译者注：1,我把“望贵公司看后能给予工作的机会”这句话放在了最后,看起来更通顺.
2,租赁业分多种,英语表达也不一样,我假设你是房屋租赁业.
3,兄弟/姐妹,你这求职信有很多需要改进的地方啊.题外话了.