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  • 能拿13分.注意格式和细节.

    Dear Xiao Wang,

    Two years past since we said goodbye at the airport.How are you lately?I miss you very much.

    Winter vacation is coming,I'd like to invite you to Shanghai.You know,many great changes have taken place in Shanghai,and if you come,I'll take you to go sightseeing,visit the Bund,Oriental Pearl Tower,Shanghai Museum,Yu Garden and so on.You can take many beautiful photos.

    I'm looking forward to seeing you.

    Best wishes,

    Wendy

    2012/11/5