假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助,请根据帖子的内容、

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  • Hi, Grown-up,

    It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

    Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

    To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.

    Hope my ideas will work.

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