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Yesterday I was busy .It rianed and rianed. In the morning, I finished my homework. Next I watched a flim with my father. Then,I drawed a picture with my sister. After that, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon,I played the piano. Next, I surfed the Internet with my uncle. Then, I played computer with my brother. After that, I called my good friend Huang Xianglong and we talked for two hours. Yesterday,I was very happy!