改错!英语改错I was a high school student then,from low income fami

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  • 1.“我来自一个家庭”,由翻译可知,在low的前面加a;

    2.把I have to work的have改成had,全文时态为一般过去时;

    3.删掉one,first和one语义重复;

    4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样,做remember的宾语,要用动名词的形式;

    5.把harder改成hard,原句没有比较的意味,所以用原形;

    6.把very tired的very改成too,因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要,所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”;

    7.把understand that的that改成it,只有it可以做形式宾语,真正的宾语为to earn money;

    8.knowledges改成knowledge,knowledge是抽象名词,不可数;

    9.把as改成than,more...than...表示比较.