Question

帮我检查作文I want to go to the Pairs.Because it is very beautiful

Answer 1

1.第一行去掉the and写错,估计是笔误

2.place--places

3.heard 在主句中为过去时,从句中为一般现在时建议,heard--hear

4.frindly--friendly funny为可笑的,建议改为kind.并且去掉they are very

5.heard 用法同上,great 在这个地方用的不太好,用delicious or appealing

6.Although.Paris 这句比较突兀,并且与上句和下句缺少联系,

7.though ----think 建议用decide ,I decide to go to there one day.

我觉得文章应该增加句式的多样性