我好好帮你看看认真修改,希望可以帮你,英语一直是我的爱好,所以就多看看多帮助大家吧
1 it 改为 Which
2 as 改为 where
3 去掉that
4 when 改为 If
5 have met 改为 meet
6 will改为would
7 obeys 改为 should obey
8 is 改为would be
9 came 改为 were coming
10 be it for改为Without
11 will 改为 would
12 burning 改为 burned
13went 改为go
14 thinks 改为thought
15 didn't 改为don't
前面几个是定语从句等方面的知识,中间有虚拟语气等方面的内容,最后是时态方面的内容,我都认真帮你看了,希望可以帮你