.Now I'm really enjoyed learning English.既然都是现在了,就不必用enjoyed 了,换成enjoying.第一句but 前后没有转折关系,改成bad .有个部分改成,is to make a vacubu…… 或者is making .还有when who talk to me who 前面没有名词,改成when people talk to me ,倒数第二段最后一句话,用现在时,你都用now 了
.Now I'm really enjoyed learning English.既然都是现在了,就不必用enjoyed 了,换成enjoying.第一句but 前后没有转折关系,改成bad .有个部分改成,is to make a vacubu…… 或者is making .还有when who talk to me who 前面没有名词,改成when people talk to me ,倒数第二段最后一句话,用现在时,你都用now 了