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Myself
Nowadays,【the word “myself”】 is coming up in conversation.Because of “myself”,we can make progress 【also improve】 our life quality.Actually,our life【 faces】 a lifelong enemy 【called】 “myself”.【Whenever,wherever】 we usually wrestle with temptation.It can say that we fight with “myself”.Of course,it gives ourself undergo trials but if you can bear hardships,after that,Not only 【can you】 have a feeling of satisfiction 【but】 also you can success your life.At this moment 【do 】some people 【argue】 that how 【we can】 win ourself?it has no method.You have to find yourself.I like myself for the simple reason that it help me get strong spirit and smart spirit.
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