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  • It may be a little rude for me to write this letter to you.

    But...

    because today is my birthday,

    I want to convey my mood on this day...

    By chance I know you.I like your music and voice.

    It sounds wonderful and it can give me power.

    On my spare time,I read your blog though I don't fully understand.

    But I am very glad that you can share something about you with fans.

    It helps me know more about you.

    I want to see your life and I can feel your charm in Japan.

    You're the motive force to keep me go forward.

    I'm not gotta think of the possibility whether I will be successful.

    I hope my dream will come true some day.

    I think I'll try my best.

    If you can reply to me.It will be the best gift that I've ever received.

    Last,please keep your struggle all along.

    I'll support you forever!

    (I am not good at Japanese.So...excuse me for sending to you in English.)