梦想,应该使用dream of doing sth.改为
my idol is MJ. My dream is that I could play basketball as good as him in one day.
或者
My idow is MJ and I dream of playing basketall as good as him in one day.
梦想,应该使用dream of doing sth.改为
my idol is MJ. My dream is that I could play basketball as good as him in one day.
或者
My idow is MJ and I dream of playing basketall as good as him in one day.