※※高中英语作文求批改※※(有加分哦!)

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  • I am a grade 2 art student,I am extremely good at drawing,I enjoyed painting very much.

    注意,那个老鼠爱大米在英语里是不那么用的.因为英国人不觉得老鼠爱大米,所以他们会不懂你在写什么.

    Iam always dreaming to be an American,so I can speak and write English flurentely without putting in so much effort .Due to the fact i have huge difficulties to learn English.This problem has troubled me for many years.it has caused me horrible headache.I have asked my English teachers through the Internet.As some teachers think that it’s important to memorise the grammer and verble,some believe good oral English comes first,and a few suggest me to do lots of homework and exercises in order to help me improve English…

    These suggestions are all good,however none of them suits me,due to the fact i have tired of memorising boring grammers and lifeless verble.I believe I will be dead if I do lots of exercises.I am wondering What is the best way for me to learn English?

    Not long ago,I came out my best solution which are reading and writing.

    The harder you write,the more progress you can make.With reading lots of English articles and take in the uesful point.

    As time passed,you’ll learn even more knowledgeable.

    Learning must be done by yourself.The writing is as important as reading,I think anyone who is blind at this point will pay a heavy price.

    Let’s shouting:anything is possible!

    你写的还okay哦,只是有些地方写的不够英语,有很多我帮你改的地方,是你句子本身没有错,但是在英文里,不会那么讲,就是所谓的中式英文,不是英式英文.

    有些句子,把你rearrange了一下,让读的人会舒服很多.

    希望你会喜欢咯.有问题的话,