看一下这篇英语作文,帮忙改下语法错误,

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  • I used to look down on beggars before that day when Dad and I went shopping.On our way home, we met a beggar, an old man with dirty clothing, who asked my father to give him some money. I really hated that beggar and refused. At that time my father was angry with me. When the beggar saw this, he said to my father, “Don’t be angry with your child like that .”Then my father held his hands and said sorry to him. I was moved at that time, and that is one of the most special memories of mine.自己看吧,你年龄应该不大,应该是小学或者初中作文,要是高中生写成这样就过分了.我没改你的语言,你的表达没逻辑.