My new flat is in the centre of the town. The flat is on the fifth floor. There’re three bedrooms, a dining-room, a kitchen and a toilet. It’s big and bright. There is a beautiful park and a large shopping mall nearby. It takes only 10 minutes to go to school by bike. I love my new flat.
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