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Dear friends,
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. I’m 14 years old. I live in Ya’an. I’m interested in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. My favourite subject is Science. I want to be a
scientist when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
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