请给这段英语指出单词拼写和语法错误的地方(2)

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  • They came here at noon.The girl's name is Arfeng,a teacher of Luo Rong No.2 Midlle (Middle)School.At (the去掉) first feeling she isn't a beautiful girl,but I got to know she was gentle with Good manners and self-cultivation.From her conversation and bearing manner(,)I found (out去掉) I fell in love with her.

    Her parents live in the Luzhai County.It is the right place for me.She isn't very pretty,but I know beauty doesn't equal love.Real beauty doesn't depend on appearance,however (,)am I a (handsome)Handsome boy?No,I'm not.So I haven't right to require others.I want to find a girl who is the best fit for me and not the (most) beautiful.