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I like sunny days, when I can go out, with friends, to the field. But I know the rainy, cloudy and windy days are also important. The rain washes the air; the cloud shields off the burning sunlight; the wind blows away the dust and the heat in the streets. They made the sunny days better.
我喜欢晴天,我可以出去,和朋友一起,到运动场.但我知道,下雨,多云和刮风的日子也很重要.雨洗刷空气,云遮挡住阳光的酷热,风吹走接到上的灰尘和热气.他们使晴天更美好.
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