1） was willing 应为 were willing TO,典型的虚拟语气；
2） a opportunity 应为 an opportunity,冠词错误；
3) 最后的引语加引号.
4) face ... and say 典型的中式英文
所以,全句应为：
If god were willing to give me an opportunity, I could say to all people: "I'm sorry!"
1） was willing 应为 were willing TO,典型的虚拟语气；
2） a opportunity 应为 an opportunity,冠词错误；
3) 最后的引语加引号.
4) face ... and say 典型的中式英文
所以,全句应为：
If god were willing to give me an opportunity, I could say to all people: "I'm sorry!"