下面几篇英文文章中,哪些地方好?为什么好,哪些地方要修改,修改后为什么好,求点评,

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  • ③My School

    ③学校

    My school is in the east (东边) of the city.It is very beautiful like a park.Let me show you around it.

    我的学校在东(东边)的城市.它是非常美丽的,像一个公园.让我带你四处.

    The school gate faces south (南方).When you go into my school,you can find the school gym on your left.The lab building is behind the school building and the next is the students' dormitory (寝室).If the students' homes are far away from the school they can live here.Behind the gym there is a playground and a swimming pool.We have our P.E.lessons here.Between the sports area and the lab there is a garden with a lot of lovely flowers.The students' cafeteria (自助食堂) is in the corner near the students' dormitory.

    学校大门南(南方).当你走进我的学校,你可以找到学校体育馆在你的左边.实验室建筑校舍后面和旁边的学生宿舍(寝室).如果学生的家离学校很远的地方就可以住在这里.在体育馆后面有一个操场和一个游泳池.我们有体育课,在这里.在体育领域和实验室里有很多可爱的花.学生餐厅(自助食堂)在角附近的学生宿舍.

    There are more than one hundred teachers and two thousand students in the school.They are working hard.I like my school very much.

    有超过一百名教师和二千名学生的学校.他们正在努力工作.我非常喜欢我的学校.