Question

请帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有离题!主题为“学好英语,迎大运” 如果有,

Answer 1

Meet the Universiade and learn English well

I am from Class 3, Grade 6,Cuibei Primary School.这句需要斟酌

I have a lot of hobbies and my mark was always excellently. 这句需要斟酌,我认为分两句比较好

I think learn English well can be little volunteers. 有两个动词,后面应该learning

So if a foreign tourist ask me some questions,I can easily help him . 语法有问题

It also can let the foreigners think our Chinese are friendly and warm.需要斟酌,中国式英语

The 26th Summer Universiade will be held in August in （in多余）

后面还可以.