.I’m so excited 改为 I was excited .
But I felt cold also.改为 But I still felt cold.
I could saw cars and people everywhere . 改为 I could see cars and people everywhere
First day 改为 On the first day
How big was there ! How big it was !
And made me surprised . 改为 And to my surprise
Second day 改为 On the second day
There was very big and beautiful. 改为 It was very big and beautiful.
I want to watch it again. 改为 I want to visit it again .