3: ...and that we will.frequently, for which reason I'd //连成一句比较通顺
4: sincerely so that you.
6: .talk with confidence. It is obvious that //confidently中式英语
8: Since we have our own different goals, each of us should set...//everyone 中式英语
10: take my suggestions, and hope it can help...//用which太狂妄自大了