初二英语作文 帮我改下语法Our feelings are changing all the time.Many thi

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  • Our feelings are changing all the time. Many things around us affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect us the most.

    Someone may dislike the rain,but i do not hate it.When it rains,the air would be refreshing,and may be a rain bow would hang in the sky.How beautiful would that be!So I might say how i like the rain.I also like the sunshine.The bright sunshine would make me feel happy,because the darkness may not exist at this time. I could study and work better.In addition to this,I don't like the wind ,because when it winds,many things would happen ,such as the spider webs would break and spiders can't produce new weds for the strong wind.That's why i don't like the wind.

    That is the reason why I think weather affect our feelings the most. Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with us?

    题目可以是I think the weather affect our feelings the most.

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