我写了篇英语作文 可能有很多的错误但是我不知道错在哪

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  • about ten years ago,I was at the age of 9.At that time,i was thinking what will i be after ten years later.

    Now im 19 years old.Over the past 10 years,my thoughts are growing so as my body.I realized that I should study hard because parents bring us up not easily,we have to repay for their upbringing and dont let them feel dissapoint on us.At the moment,I dont know what will i be at the ten years later,but i will still work hard to create a happy life.Asy friends said,any dream can be succeeded,as long as we work hard struggle,one day out feet can reach.