My mother My mother is a shop assistant,she is 34 years old.Her name is Sun Huanxia.She has two big eyes,a small nose,a small mouth and long black hair.Her favourite food is noodle,and Her favourite fruit is apple.She likes playing computer games with me.She helps me and I help her too.I like her very much.注意一下SHE的所有格HER 根据英语国家习惯Her name is Sun Huanxia.这一句可以删掉
评论英语作文我这里有一片英语作文,请高手们（会英语的）评论一下.My matherMy mother is a shop