错误在括号处标明!共十处错误!
One day,I was in a really bad mood.I decided that (driving) to the shopping centre would clear my head.The car park was busy when I arrived,(so) I had to park in a far corner.
From this spot,I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic.The clinic was closed but I could now (clearly) see the man's injury.Blood (was) flowing all over his foot.
(Getting) the bandages I (had) in the glove box,I went over to the group and offered my help.One of the women used the bandages to stop (去掉from) the blood flow and they made (their) way back to her car.My own fortunes had suddenly (changed) too—I felt terrlfic.
I am (grateful) to have been able to show some kindness.
1.drving to the shopping center宾语从句的主语,不过改成to drive to the shopping center也可以；
2.前后句之间明显构成因果关系（so）,而不是转折关系（but）；
3.副词clearly修饰动词see,形容词clear不可；
4.blood“血液”为不可数名词,谓语动词用单数was；
5.get the bandages为状语,且句子主语I与get构成主动关系,所以用现在分词getting；
6.该句说明当时情况,所以用一般过去时（had）；
7.stop为及物动词,而the blood flow为其宾语,两者之间无须介词from；
8.短语make one's way to...中的one's必须和主语they一致,所以用their；
9.过去完成时结构“had + 过去分词”,所以用had；
10.形容词grateful（不是greatful）做表语,但副词gratefully不可.