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  • Everyone has historical figure admired. I also have one, who is the person I admire most, Helen Keller. I believe you have seen the article if gave me three days light. This is the famous book which moved the wold, writen by the blind and deaf girl Keller.

    Helen Keller was born in Southern America. 19 months after she was born, because of a serious illness, she lost her eyesight and hearing. At the age of 8, Helen's mother found a tutor -- Anne miss Sullivan for her, and enter the Perkins to study. At age 16, Helen entered into Harvard University affiliated Cambridge college for women learn English history, German, Latin, mathematics and many literary classics. Four years after that, she goes into Harvard University, began to write. After graduation from the university, Helen concentrated on pushing the blind care movement, such as publishing blind journals, establishing security blind cell committee. And she finally made the bind peoples voice be heard. In 1959,at the United Nations general assembly, the delegates consistently praised her contribution to human. In 1968, Helen Keller calmly went through her life hard and full of glory .

    A deaf and blind women could have made so great achievements, It's amazing and worth admiring. If Helen submitted to unfortunate fate, she might become a poor and foolish lodger. But she didn't bend to fate, she with amazing perseverance and indomitable spirit, walked on the way of life, and made a great contribution to the human.She become a knowledgeable and respectable woman. Helen's life was not ordinary. She inspired the failed people and made people idoling feel regret. She perseverance moved me, that it is the reason why I admire her.