Question

帮我看看这段英语自我介绍!帮我看下吧!看有错误没有,有的话帮我改一下!（包括大小写!）IHi!My name is Qi

Answer 1

妹妹有些部分呀修改!

Hi!

My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.

I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years old.

I like oranges very much.I like playing computer games.

I have a dog,it's black and white,its neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.

This is me．

my super star is super junior.就这句话叔叔没看懂,