Dear John,
Thangks for your letter . I want to tell you about my vacation . I usually go to swimming. When I go to the beach, I see many people swimming in the sea. When I swim up. I saw a man drowning, I am very nervous. Afraid he would die. But, soon someone save him up. I went to shopping with my parents. We buy a lot of things. Evening we watch TV together
your friend
TOM
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