Is Dieting Good or Bad?
As far as I want to say,dieting is good.Some people always think that dieting means you can not get enough nutrition which is bad for your health.However,in my opinion ,this is not ture.As a matter of fact,dieting means the less burden you give to the stomach.
As we all know,nowdays in China,food salfty is becoming a more and more serious problem.There are so many food which have quality problems around us that we even do not know how much unhealthy food we eat which may full of food additive,hormone and posion chemical composition.During digestion process,these would harmful to our body and cause diseases.So I think the less food you eat,the less burden you give to your digestive system.Besides,if you want to eat some delicious food in a resterant,it will be quite expensive and takes a lot fo time.
In one word,eating less does not cause malnutrition.In fact,food experts tell us we should choose vegetables and fruits istead of meat because compared with meat,vegetables and fruits has less fat.As we all konw fat can makes us fatter than before and causes illness such as heart disease .So,in order to keep healthy,let us have a diet.At the same time,we can also stay slim.So why don't we kill two birds with one stone.
我只是粗略地改了下,不过看你应该是初中差不多吧.建议不要写长句子,容易出错.你的这篇作文可能有点偏题了,最多60%吧（改好后）.写英语作文一定要记住,一个句子只有一个主语.尽量不要写长句子,除非很有把握.最后注意单词拼写不要错了,单复数不要错了.