1.I haven't any time for my hobbies中haven't应该是don't have（现在时否定用助动词）
2.such as go on a trip and sleep.
such as后面用名词或句子,不该用go 和sleep,都要加ing
3.I planed to go Beijng：Beijing前面用定冠词“the”
4.I have to foget this plan ：have to有它的过去式,为had to
5.Sometimes I feel bring and stressed,这个你打错了吧,“bring”