Due to some people come to realize the negative effects of smoking,they are compelled to give up smoking.
应该是
Because some people come to realize the negative effects of smoking,they are compelled to give up smoking.
On the other hand,the authorities passed laws to limit tobacco production and consumption,raise tobacco taxes and prohibit smoking in public places.
要注意时态,后半句要用过去时态.
Raise-raised.Prohibit-prohibited
其它都好