在这里我只是改一下错误,因为文章好坏还得自己体会!
Playing sports teach us lessons about life中teach改为teaches.
I agree with the saying that we can learn some about life from playing sport因为第一句用的sports所以在这里最好用sports.
Teamwork is a important quality not only for a person,but also for a team.中a important quality应改为a kind of important quality.
The second reason is that playing sports can teach us to use a normally attitude to face failure and win.中a normally attitude应改为a normal attitude.failure and win 中的failure最好为failures win在这儿最好在找一个更好的词来代替!
Nowadays,most modern-day students(应加一个are )spoiled by their parents.
No matter what they want,their parents can give them and achieve their requirement.
中can give them 后应加宾语,比如what they want.achieve their requirement.应该为requirements.You must have enough courage and good attitude to undertake whatever happen.改为happens.
On the contrary,If you win,you can be proud of yourself but cannot self-important.中 but cannot self-important用的不太地道 最好写成and not to be self-important.
When we growing up(应改为grow up),we will find(最好加一个that) life just like competition,we must have enough courage and good attitude to meet challenges and risks.
Then we can have a good spirits(应改为sprit) to study and work.
playing basketball can make(应改为improve 应为后边少谓语动词) us physical agility and running can enhance their（应改为our)flexibility,leg power and the cardiopulmonary function.
In conclusion,playing sport can teach us teamwork and how to use(use在这里不太地道,最好用prsent _展现出） to face failure and win.Beside（加s）,it is(去掉is)mulate(加s)ur brain and body activity( activity是活动,在这儿应用能力一词ability)