这一段这么改改会不会好点：
Good morning.It is really a great honor to have this interview.My name is xx,I was born on xx Feburary,XXXX at xxxx(出生地）.During 2006 to 2010,I have studied xx(专业) in xx(学校）.As a graduation ,I know that I do not have much experience.but I have great passion and I am eager to learn more.I have confidence to do a good job with my diligence .Thank you!
我翻译的也不是太好,还请指正!
主要指出两个问题1·尽量不要用简写形式,如 It's 等,这样会比较庄重
2·尽量简洁,短小精悍
谢谢