请大家帮我看看这个,没有的话看哪里可以改进的更好,

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  • I named myself king ,but i thik i should own better one in the future .Today is a bad day with rain and wind.However,i still feel very happy ,because i went to huamao with my firend ,then i went to my friend's company .I konw that i shall work harder every day for living a better life.

    I have to be outsanding,it's important.i want to go Maldives and Hawaii.Do you want to go with me?I'm gold to do this.

    Even i want to write a lot of things,but i just not good at English.well,that's it .OK,i forgive me,good night .