求英语高手帮我看一下这篇作文哪里有错!

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  • 问题多时间紧,直接改了.尽量保持题主的写作思路和风格,只改动语法和部分修辞.

    Happy Spring Festival!What do you think of the Festival?I think it makes me feel very tired,but at the same time am happy and excited.In china,married couple will give money to children as fortune money in Spring Festival.So after the Festival a lot of children will have lots of fortune money.This time of year is the wealthiest time for me.But how to spend it if you ask me,and here's how.Firstly I'll give back 30% of it to my parents for they usually spend a lot during this time of the year,so I'd like to help them out even it means little to them.Secondly,my mother will help me by putting another 30% in my savings account.Thirdly,I will use the rest of it to buy some useful books or other things related to study.Time flies and we must go back to school in a few days.I hope my study this term would be better and better.