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  • At the first 这里 is just occasionally.用词不当 I simply thought you as a ordinary girl.you’ve not got a fascinating face ,not 这里少了个ANattracting figure,这里整个句子不对.all in a 应该是SENTENCE,you’re not the girl I 少了个WOULD like.

    Until the day``````the day I suddenly NOTICED 更好find you look so lovely.your big eyes,you sexy lips,you dainty and 少了个YOURlittle figure that 应该是WEREall was bad in past now 去掉wholely become a temptation for me .i do not know when I was 应该用FELLfallen in love with you .people call this kind of love: unrequited love—a love without 少了个A result.

    You’去掉ARE re still work with me as usual.逗号 but my world is tatally changed when I’去掉AMm stay with you.But i deeply know myself is introvert,I 因该是CANNOT BE BRAVE ENOUGH TO SAY IT TO YOUR FACEcould not take off my face to say:I love you.i just selfishly show my careless about you ,just personally thoug少了个H -THOUGHTt that you 应该是YOU ARE IN LOVEWITH ME can love me too.this time,my cool show make me lose you for I know there’s the another him is seeking after you.

    During this days I’ve found many chances to appoint you .when I am in front of you ,I just to show my notice on other place .once time ,I can feel your hearts beaten .but my cool face eventually refuse antihing including you .girl,do you still rember the quiz that day,to accompany you ,I give up all which I desirely attempt to before,girl ,do you know ,each time I take out of my cellphone just feel like sending you a message to express my missing heart,but I could not send it out to you for I look important upon the so—called face.

    Girl ,now I know I lost you entirely .i konw the other him has catured your heart.but I stiil have no enough courage to ask you whether all things are true . I really hardly accept the fact.people oueside all think you’re now live with him,but inside my heart,you’re my queen.

    Girl ,doyou know now,I’m start a novel,I lay pacticular stress on a boy that similar to me .

    Girl ,tommorow I’ll have my hair cut just to leave my mind without you ,to set my life free,to let you know the resultless love is no more unrequited.

    对不起我没有时间了

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