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  • Some people think that schools should only teach students academic knowledge.Some people think that they should teach students to judge what is right and wrong.Discuss both views and give their views.When we discussed the responsibility of schools,people's attitudes vary from one to another.Some people believe that schools should be the focus of their academic studies,while others embrace,it is imperative for schools to teach students right from wrong.In my opinion,the following statements should be taken into account.First,a failure of the primary standards or conformity assessment school teachers can effectively impart academic knowledge to students.After all,the students achieved higher levels of academic research and school reputation has better performance.In addition,schools can help students achieve their educational goals and the right.Based on solid academic foundations for the next two schools is not limited to transfer the responsibility of the students academic knowledge,inspiration and how they judge what is wrong is a school that should be another important task.It is inevitable that one day the students out of school,into their complex social,they will face,rather than simply academic questions difficult task.In order to better prepare and adapt to society,students should be embedded in society imply recommendation on how to distinguish a good sign of poor school teachers from sharing or discussing their different views of students.However,school students to guide and shape the personality and behavior may not be significant help to students in the family's progress,because students in the academic study of ideological and moral construction is nurture,friends,schools,and many other things,complex society.Obviously,schools should not only teach students about academic research,but also try to shape the character and moral image.Also,because the latter seems to be limited,but not significant,the entire community to be seen to work together to ensure overall development of students.

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