Question

英语翻译请把下面这段话翻译成英文,当然能多加几个修饰的词就更好了,因为我在凑字数.他针对家乡旅游现状的不足之处提出了几点

Answer 1

For the current situation of the tourism develpement in his hometown,

he gave several opinions and advices,and he's confident of that the future of the tourism develpement in his hometown will be better and better.