Today I have a self-introduction.去掉,不需要
I'm 13 years old.就可以了
I Ilike my new school because it is beautiful,and teachers are very responsible.
I make lots of friends here,such as Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.
Ivy is smart and kind while Teresa is really qute.
share time改为 spare time
书名号去掉,可写成斜体或加下划线
and i like art class the best改为 art class is my favourite class because it is interesting
So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist可改为 therefore,I want to be an artist in the future.
if I hard enough --- If I work hard
I will success --- I will succeed