你的文章大部分已经是过去式了,只除了一些小问题,我给你改了.除了这些时态的问题以外,我还顺手把一些文法的小错误给改了,比如run-on sentences之类的:)
I went to a friend's house; her home was in the countryside.On that day,I set out from my house nine in the morning and rode for an hour to her home.When I arrived at her house,she warmly invited me to go with her to pick strawberry.She told me how to grow strawberry and how to pick strawberry correctly.At noon,we ate a delicious lunch.In the afternoon,we went to climb the mountain near 【her house 山旁边的山?这是打错了吧?我把他改成她家旁边的山了.】.The mountain was very cool,and there were a lot of wild flowers.
希望对你有所帮助,如果有问题的话也欢迎追问~
-dmblbc-