This is a wonderful place for you to appreciate the lotus,where you can find the most beautiful flower in the water.
用 where 把两句并作一句显得更地道些.另外原句中的 this spot is a ...place 显得重复,改成 this is a ...place 简洁明了.前一个 lotus 和句末的 lotus 也重复了,换作 flower in the water 有些变化,句子生动些.