请问这篇英语作文有语法错误之类的吗?

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  • 错误比较多

    下面是改正过的

    My favourite sport

    My favourite sport is swimming even though I can't swim.I go for swimming in summer.I go for swimming once a week in summer.I go for swimming with friend,Coco.She is good at swimming.I will work hard to learn to swim.I will become the best in it.Last month,my parents and I went for swimming.We took the bus to the swimming pool.We were happy