英语作文帮忙评改,看看我哪里表达不明白和语法错误

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  • 1.once a person who is carrying a basket at his back follows the ladder tightly and moves up a rung .

    2.There is an apple tree at this rung top.

    3.The person wants to pick some apples there.

    4.no matter what we are doing,we should never stop making efforts.

    5.Firstly,if people do not make great efforts,and only keeping complaining about no good opportunities in their life.

    6.Then,those people will not have a remarkable achievement.

    7.Secondly,there's no difference of the basic things between people,the only way to judge a person is how hard he works.If he keeps working hard and never gives up,he well pick the sucessful fruit sometime in the future.

    8.it is necessary for us to firm our own aim