Gulliver's Travels
Gulliver's Travels is a fantasy （此处应该为fantasty）novel,(which is written by) Jonathan Swift,a British who was born in Ireland.The book is about a man named Gulliver.Gulliver has traveled to four countries,Lilliput,Brobdingnag,Laputa and Houyhnhnms.He experienced many difficulties but he didn’t give up the hope of live.he still continued his principle ,and stay out of trouble by himself.
As far as i can see,he is a hero.for facing with difficulties he has never shown his fear but always lookS happy,and in the end he came back to his hometown.
Different countries have their own feature,but the Brobdingnag was impressed upon me.The people there are very tall and strong.Besides,the king of this country was very pride.So he thought his country was the best in the world.His words made people laugh.Gulliver became an(用an而不用a) actor and played acrobatics for king.What a bad experience it was!
I think Gulliver’s life is like a zigzag,but he's never given in to his fate.I am proud of him.And i think if i were Gulliver,maybe i can’t do such good like him.i am interested in this foreign novel.Sometimes i hope i can become the heroine in this book and experience lots of funny things.
This novel is wroth to reading,i recommend that you can read it in your free time .
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