请高手帮忙修改并评价指正这篇4级作文,

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你好,根据你的文章,我做了如下修改. As it is known to all that today is Teachers' Day.（注意as是连词,前后句应该成句,另外运用从句会加分）Having been in my university for two years,（attend表示出席会议、...